Interesting aleeping pose, and I'm glad you got some of the features of the face showing. A tighter crop would be nice if the details can take it - off of bottom, left, and bit on top would be my suggestion. Good job on the exposure, and I like your title too - very ā propos :-)
I agree 100% with Danial on his crop suggestion. I would also suggest to tone down a TAD the whites. Nice pose, light, exppsure, detail and species. Congratulations!
Like the mood. The repost reflects my compositional 2 cents.
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I did not crop the image (other than to marginally straighten it) as I felt the greater expanse of water added to the theme of the image. James' comment touched on this.