Very good portrait, I like the exposure control, sharpness and BG and might lighten the eye a bit. It looks as if he broke the tip of the upper mandible. Do they regrow? Maybe that is a question for John Chardine.
The broken tip was the first thing I noticed in the image. I wonder how he broke it. Good control on the whites Doug, and I agree on lightening the eye.
I agree with the above comments. Good sharpness, and I like the small water drops on the wing. Interesting beak "wound", not sure that I like that - but it is good as a documentation of what can and does happen.
White are border but look Ok on my monitor. Nice exposure control. The broken bill called my atention right away. Nice species and BG.
Congratulations.