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    Gal Shon
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    Default Red-throated Pipit

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    ~ 95% of the original, 20D 400/f5.6
    Iso 200, f6.3, 1/500, -0.67
    Feel free to comment and thanks for looking

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    Lovely image Gal, Nice warm lighting, BG and sharp. I might take some canas away from the right side, too much empty space IMO. Congrats.

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    Last edited by Brian Barcelos; 07-18-2009 at 09:23 AM.

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    Axel Hildebrandt
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    I like the angle, pose, exposure control, sharpness and complementing BG. I might lighten the eye and crop a tad off the right.

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    Nice shot. The complimentary BG is great, as is the bird's pose. I like the inquisitive stare, it leads you right to your signature. I would maybe clean up the whitewash on top of the perch and clone out the protruding stick below the bird.

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    Nicely composed image. Agree with the above said. My suggestion would be to place the bird a little higher. Congratulations.

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    clone out the protruding stick below the bird.
    Thank you for that, now that I see it, it shouldn't be there...

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    Superb light and BG. I like a lot the empty room at the right but would prefer the bird placed more at the left upper corner.

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    Gal, super angled pose, and this is really sharp. Good detail, and I like the overall colours in this.

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    I agree that the bird higher in the frame would improve comp, but the rest IMO, is simply superb! Great light, great pose, lovely BG, nice perch and detail.Congratulations.

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    Lovely crisp image and smooth background.

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    Nice sharp image with good colour and BG, I think you could have placed the subject a bit more to the right, you may have been able to get away with it due to the head/body angle, although I do like the space you have kept...

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    Hi Gal:

    I like the pose, the light, the BG and even the almost 3D look of the rock on the left. Great image. Although I'd like to see the bird a little more on the right.

    Cheers,

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    Ákos Lumnitzer
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    This looks great Gal! I love the tonalities very much. If you have room for a vertical crop from the original RAW file, I would suggest that. it would look fab!

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