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    Here is another image of the Song Sparrow in the one legged pose. Cropped to vertical, used NR and I darkened the perch (that is what I failed to do properly on the first post). Let me know what you think.

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    The pose is funny but it doesn't really show the species characterisitcs, I like the previous one better to be honest.
    Nice light, BG, perch and comp though, although IMO, the bird could go a bit higher in the frame.
    Congratulations.

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    I like this different perspective Lorant (bocs, nincs ekezet a szamitogepes terminalnal) :D What I like is the pose and the BG, though I feel the space above could lose about half? What do you think?

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    I like the matching of colour and texture between the bird and the perch and the Bg grren color. The colour temperature seems to be a bit on the cold side of the spectrum and the Bg would be improved with a round of noise reduction

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    Like the pose and agree some top could be lost. Like the suggestion of nr on the bg. To me, it looks like you applied nr on the bird though, as the feather detail looks smoothed.

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    I like the pose, perch, eye contact and BG and agree regarding raising the color temperature a few degrees.

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