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    Connie Mier
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    Thanks to all who provided feedback on a previous post of mine, I went back and made some changes including rotation, increased temperature, gradient filter and darkening the bird. I also chose to place the bird in the upper corner, as a couple people suggested. Hope you enjoy this improvement.
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    Fabs Forns
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    Much stronger composition and presentation, Connie, congratulations!

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    Ákos Lumnitzer
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    It is simply fabulous Connie. Well done on the reassessment and effort; the result speaks louder than words. Thanks for sharing. :)

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    Hugh J McLaughlin
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    Seems as if got some good advice, which was followed to great effect.

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    Alfred Forns
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    Well done Connie !! Very sweet Love all the changes Got a wall hanger !!! Big Congrats !!!

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    Ryan Lambert
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    The comp change makes all the difference, congrats here

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    Connie I missed the original post but this one is just superb. Everything works very smoothly in this composition. I love the simplicity of composition, the nice soft orange and the action. Very good job

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    Well done Connie! This has real punch and that wow factor! Real improvement.

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    I missed the first but I must say that WOW.... this is a superb shot and it looks like once again BPN has helped us all by learning.

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    Haven't see the frist one but this one is beautiful, the shadow in the water goes very well with silhouette. I love the mood in this picture.

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    I liked the first one but this is even better, good composition, silhouette, reflection and colors.

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    print it big. love it Connie! very simplistic, peaceful and effective...
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