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    Thanks Fabs, for helping earlier. Now I am home and can sort through my photos. This shot taken on a overcast day on Wolfe Island. I was crawling with Rough-Legged Hawks but lighting was bad. I have enjoyed your website..lots of fantastic photos, hopefully I can learn a lot. I am trying to photograph all the birds in my first bird book "Golden Guide to Birds of North America" 1963 Edition, 505 birds on film (not all great shots), 194 more to go. This is my first post. I am learning the rules here so bear with me.

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    Original was 14.25 x 9.5
    Cropped to 7.5 x 5

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    Paul it would help us if you posted more info about how the image was captured. ie. Camera, lens, shutter speed, ISO, aperture, exposure mode etc.

    My first impression suggests that a tighter crop would have given the bird more presence in the frame.

    Don't worry mate I too am on a steep learning curve and this is the place to be if you wish to learn from the best.

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    I can't help comment on the comment! Steep learning curves are good- it means that you learn something fast. Shallow-sloping learning curves are what you don't want because you work hard learning something and you have little to show for it. I agree that this site produces a steep learning curve but this is a good thing!

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    Hi Paul,

    You shooting information will be helpful on posts, especially F stops, ISO, shutter speed, and lenses used.

    I have spent much time photographing these wintering raptors the past two years - I love their hovering while hunting!

    Your overall composition and elements of it are very pleasing- the weathered fence, background, and diagonal fence line. I might wish the bird were a wee bit larger in frame, but more important, I wish it were just a bit less soft. The head and chest area are a little bit soft-not sure if additional sharpening selectively might help. Hope you are seeing snowy owls over there too.

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    Paul
    I've come to like images with the bird small in the frame. I like the components of the image....fence, vegetation, snow, and bird. It gives me a sense habitat for this hawk. Also....it has a 3D appearance which I especially like. The hawk does appear somewhat soft but I think that you can get away with it on an image this size. If you were to print this one in a larger size, it might be a different story.

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    Hi Paul,

    Welcome. You've started off with a nice first post and you've received some good advice. I like the bird, fence, and bg(except for the building?). Perhaps a crop from the right and a small crop from top and bottom.
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    Not sure this is what you meant....lolol..the building in background are haybails....
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    Haybails - buildings, same thing. Your repost is exactly what I meant except a little less crop on top. I think you want to crop just enough so the haybails don't look like buildings. One other thing that I think would help this image would be to selectively sharpen the bird, but not the bg. It looks USM was applied to the entire image resulting in a grainy bg.
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    Paul. I agree with Jim. The background has been compromised here by sharpening all.

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