Although I got many closer opprotunities, I rather like the mood of this more "distant" image. These young ones are two of a group of six that hang out together. Some are more adventurous than others and like to explore the open waters. Full-frame lenght-wise, but cropped top and bottom as a pano. A bit of debris was removed from the water via the patch tool. The apparant "halos" above the heads are there on the RAW file and looks like it may be light shining on lighter feathers.
Daniel, I too like the mood here and your pano style crop. The greens and yellows really make this stand out IMO. I think the birds could use a little more sharpening though. Congrats.
A very nice image but lacking something.
The focus is definately on the grebe? (not sure of the species) on the left. I know it's real difficult to get 2 birds in focus in the same image.
The eyes could be dodged a little and sharpened.
The space above the birds crys out for something to fill it e.g. tree limb, leaf, bank, etc.
The lack of space below the birds is distracting, throws the image out of balance.
A super nice idea and rendition.
Congrats.
dan
I really like the low angle and mood in this - sweet water reflections in the BG. I would place the birds slightly higher in the comp, with more DOF of out-of-focus water in front.
It works very fine for me Daniel but I would prefer just a litle bit of additional room at the bottom (keeping your idea of placing both birds very low in the frame)