Gordon, I really really like your image! I like the neck curve, the water drops, the sharpness, and the background! I might go even a little bit closer cropping off just a little off the top, and some off the bottom. really like this image!
I think you did very well at getting the eye contact, and you nailed the focus too! Your crop emphasizes the long neck, but for my tastes, I'd like a little more space on the right. The wide aperture separates the bird from the BG too.
My first impression is that the image is a little dark, and looking at the histogram for your image, I think you have room to push the values to the right. I see detail in the shadows that can be more visible; the Shadow/Highlight tool in PS might be an option to try. On the other hand, it definitely has a rainy day feel to it, so others may prefer it just like it is!
Some good advice given from others. Focus is good. Love the rain/water droplets. A little work on the eye, maybe? to give a bit more detail. The subject is unusual in Australia!
Hi Gordon,
I like tis as presented...I like the sharp eye contact and the fine feather detail, the water drop on the bill is a plus...well done...:cool:
Hi Gordon - exposure looks OK to me seeing detail in the blacks on my screen- Good Ha and eye contact.
Composition and crop are good for my tastes.
Keep them coming :)
I like the idea of a little different crop giving more space up front Not sure how I would go about it with the neck angle Love the sharpness and overall look !!!
Swan closeup
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