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Thread: Morning has Broken

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    David Roach
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    Default Morning has Broken

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    Created at Wako just after sunrise.
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    Axel Hildebrandt
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    I like the morning light, setting and raised crest. I might tone down the whites a bit more, sharpen the bird more and remove the bright spot on the bill.

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    Adding to Axel's comments you could also apply some NR to the bg, and eliminate some of the OOF stuff near the legs and near left edge. Raised cresst look nice.

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    With some suggested changes.

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    Sweet light David, and love that crest. Great work on the repost.

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    Fabs Forns
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    Great repost, David. I still detect some magenta in the whites.

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    Ákos Lumnitzer
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    My first thought was the magenta too. I would also remove the white speck on the bill as it (to me) adds nothing. Your repost is heaps better though Dave. Love this image. Thanks for sharing. :)

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