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    Default Top of the world II

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    The same sparrow, same rock. One more image of the same series.

    Canon 30D
    Canon 35-350@350mm
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    Tripod
    f/6.3
    1/160sec.
    ISO 400
    Exp. Comp. +1
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    Comments and critiques are welcome.

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    Axel Hildebrandt
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    I really like the pose in this one. Perch, light and BG look good, too. Is this a big crop? I'm wondering because the back seems to lack the fine detail.

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    This one is WAY better than the first one IMO, better pose, better light, better color temperature, nicer BG, and also to me, better IQ.
    Congratulations!

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    I like the pose and the clean background, the exposer is perfect to me.

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    Great exposure and pose. BG is a killer Juan Carlos. It appears to be a little soft around the wing/back area. Is it crop or the DOF too shallow? Thanks for sharing. It does look wonderful. :)

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    Nice lighting and soft BG, great EXP. Appears to be slight motion blur on the wing. Increasing the shutter speed by at least 1 stop might've helped. Great work!
    Last edited by Erich Stevens; 07-16-2009 at 08:34 AM.

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    What a striking sparrow. This ain't no ordinary LBJ!! The BG sets this beauty off very nicely. I'm also noticing the lask of fine details on the shoulder/back area of the bird.

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    Super pose, and I like the colours on him. Overall, he is sharp, apart from the area on the back as mentioned by the other guys. Superb BG. I would maybe take a bit off the bottom.

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    I like the background. The pose of the bird is pleasing with an nice head angle. In my opinion the placement of the bird is spot on but a little less rock might also work as suggested by Stuart. The detail is good except for the soft area on the back.

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    Thank you all guys for your kind comments and suggestions.

    Now I ask, can this be an improvement?

    Thank you for your reply. jc

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    Lovely colors and BG, beautiful bird.
    the beak area a bit soft, looks better in the repost.

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