Hi Harold. I like the image but I think maybe the midtone contrast needs to be darker, as the image comes across a little flat on my monitor. There also appears to be blue CA and sharpening halos. IMO, the raptor would look better higher in the frame.
Excellent sharpness and wing position although the bill gets a little lost in the far wing. Definitely needs a contrast boost and some chromatic aberration help. I also like the idea of a tighter crop.