Spider

[Diego Torrentes]

Hi:

Here's a picture took last summer near my home.

Enjoy it.

Bye,

PENTAX K10D
DA 50-200mm at 200 mm
F5.6
1/250s
ISO100
Multisegment metering
Hand held

[Thanaboon Jearkjirm]

Good details on the spider, I really like how the sun lit up the web and make it glow. I might try to crop off the left a bit.

[denise ippolito]

Diego, I like the details on most of the spider. I wish the head were a bit sharper. Not sure what the white zig zag is ? As presented I would take some off the left-Look forward to more.

[Gus Cobos]

Hi Diego,
I would recommend on cropping from the left side up close to the spider, and lighten up the background just a tad not too much...the focus point is not on the center of the spider, instead of aperture setting of f/5.6, I would suggest on stopping down to about an f/11 in order to get more depth of field...looking forward to your next one...:cool:

[Lance Peters]

Agree with Gus's assessment, IMHO also I would prefer to see a topside view rather than a underside view.
keep em coming :)

[Alfred Forns]

Hi Diego These are tough and gives me my lowest keeper rate of all my macro work !!!

Would try different angles to accentuate the web having the most under the dof !!!

[Diego Torrentes]

Hi:

Thank you everyone for your gentle constructive critiques, I really appreciate them. I hope they help me to improve my next images.

Bye,