Wonderful colors and textures in the BG, super reflection, only would wish for a slight CCW turn in the HA. This nicely portrays the grace of these elegant birds.
Interesting pose, good sharpness and light. I agree regarding some CW rotation and am wondering if a lower angle would have made it stronger since the surface of the water is not even.
I fixed your post, you had 3 links to the image which prevents the forum software from creating a thumbnail.