Aidan
I just scrolled back and don't easily find the other one...so I'll comment on this one. The bg, perch and bird are lovely. The vertical presentation and the position of the bird is artistic, has an oriental feel perhaps. Yes, I do mind the clipped leaf, esp the one on the right. It's hard to see that as you photograph because of concentration on the subject, but the elements are important.
Aidan, I prefer this one, as it shows more of the perch - but hope you still have room to include the rest of the clipped leaf. His beak is also cleaner. LOL.
I like the first one as I feel it places more attention on the bird while including the colorful part of the perch. However, both are very nice. Good show!