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    Came across this great egret who was catching one terrapin after another...expertly I must add. The terrapin is not sharp because I did not get a high shutter speed and he was in the process of flipping it.

    40d. 300 f/4L non-Is. 1.4x. hand-held. iso 500. 1/200. f/5.6. exp. comp +1. flash comp. -1 (I think I should have gone down further on that). Shot in shade.

    I would have liked more room on the right but there is a very distracting OOF tree in the orig there.

    All critiques welcome and appreciated.

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    I think your flash comp is fine, I would like to see the photo a little lighter overall.

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    Nice feeding behaviour. I din't mind the prey item being a bit blurred from movement...gives it a sense of being still alive and struggling to escape.

    flash comp. -1 (I think I should have gone down further on that)
    Could be just me, but I think you could have actually gone HIGHER on that. I still like the result though. If you want more room at right you could always clone/patch out the tree instead of cropping it out - should be easy with this BG. You you have been able to step further to your right during capture to eliminate it in-camera?

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    Doug, thx. I will go back to my RAW file and increase the exposure a bit. Admittedly, I am a little too paranoid about overexposing whites. still learning.

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    a little better?

    Daniel, I did not move to the right for background's sake. If I had done that, then I would have had a diagonal lake bank cutting right across the egret.
    Last edited by Kaustubh Deshpande; 07-06-2009 at 09:09 PM. Reason: wrong file had been attached

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    I like the re post better. Very nice capture. Poor soft-shell, I just got my son his first pet turtle this week. I'm not going to show him this!;)
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    I too like the re post better. You achieved good detail. If you want more on the right you could add a bit of canvas to the image as presented. With the clean BG this should be easy to do.

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    Great repost with the whites. I would do some selective sharpening on the head and bill.

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