agree with Axel on the crop. Loved the pose and the head angle. But the situation itself looks less-than-ideal for photography. strong light from top, busy FG and FG... and probably the bank is raised w.r.t the water preventing you getting an eye-level angle.
I love the pose you can almost feel the tension. I also like the inclusion of the habitat. It helps give me a sense of scale and adds to the story/feel of the picture. I agree with Axel on his cropping suggestion. Thanks for sharing.