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    This juvi Barn Swallow was take Fri morning at Belle Island Reserve in Boston.
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    I could be wrong, but on my monitor, this image seems to have a color cast on it. The perch appears to have a lot of things happened to it that it has turned itself into a busy background for the bird. The bird itself has a lot of details and so is the perch. I wonder if it was possible for you to shoot from a different perspective...to not to show the surface of the perch too much...Anyway, just my two cents. :)

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    I like the pose and soft light and agree that the trunk is somewhat overpowering.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Desmond Chan View Post
    I could be wrong, but on my monitor, this image seems to have a color cast on it. The perch appears to have a lot of things happened to it that it has turned itself into a busy background for the bird. The bird itself has a lot of details and so is the perch. I wonder if it was possible for you to shoot from a different perspective...to not to show the surface of the perch too much...Anyway, just my two cents. :)

    Thanks for sharing!
    Thanks Desmond, I don't really see a cast. There's lots of green in BG and perch but not on the whites of the bird.
    I do have some with different perspective, will post...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Axel Hildebrandt View Post
    I like the pose and soft light and agree that the trunk is somewhat overpowering.
    Thanks Axel,
    I thought that the perch texture is interesting by itself. I did few with lower angle, will post...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ilija Dukovski View Post
    Thanks Desmond, I don't really see a cast. There's lots of green in BG and perch but not on the whites of the bird. I do have some with different perspective, will post... Thanks...
    Sorry Charley. There is/was a huge green cast to this image.... In addition, the bokeh on the bark is weird. :)
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    Quote Originally Posted by Arthur Morris View Post
    Sorry Charley. There is/was a huge green cast to this image....
    Hm, I didn't see it and the re-post to me has a bit of magenta cast.
    This is second time that it happened to me. I re-calibrated and it seems even worse now.
    I obviously need to do more careful recalibration...

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    The tree bark in the repost looks pretty grey to me. I would appreciate hearing what others are seeing. If you open both images and tool around with the eyedropper while checking the RGB values in Info, you will see that there is way too much green in all colors. If you do an average blur on the original image, the RGB values are as follows: R/123, G/131, B/83. The numbers don't lie. That is a green cast.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Arthur Morris View Post
    The tree bark in the repost looks pretty grey to me. I would appreciate hearing what others are seeing. If you open both images and tool around with the eyedropper while checking the RGB values in Info, you will see that there is way too much green in all colors. If you do an average blur on the original image, the RGB values are as follows: R/123, G/131, B/83. The numbers don't lie. That is a green cast.
    Oh no I'm not questioning that there is a green cast. I said this is second time somebody points out a green
    cast and their repost also looked with magenta cast to me. That means I did not do a proper callibration.
    The question is how do I do proper callibration. Yesterday I tried on the Mac and
    didn't like the result. I also tried the defaults, no good. I tried the ER forum but did not get a clear cut answer
    how to do proper calibration. Can you please point a link to ER thread with proper calibration procedure?


    Thanks again, I really appreciate your help, and especially that you are taking the time to go into details and
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    This way my learning curve is quite steep :)

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