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    This beautiful bird graced me with a landing in a tree not to far off and I waited until in jumped up to fly off and this is the result. Hope you like it! All comments and or suggestions welcomed. (I know the white on the tail is over exposed :))
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    Exposure mode: Manual
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    ISO: 400
    Focal length: 500mm

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    Great wing position and eye contact! Excellent sharpness. I'd like a bit more room up front and I'd try to bring out some more detail in the darks.
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    Doug stole my critique. Lightening the face and the eye selectively would be an option. Killer wing position.
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    Thank you guys for the imput!! Much appreciated!!
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    I agree with the suggestion above. Nice pose, and comp though. I would also try to save the whites from the tail, they look hot in my monitor.
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    Ditto Doug, Still GREAT image well done

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    Well timed & great posture. Agree with suggestions. Still well done!

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