One more selective sharpening pass on the face would be good, but overall pretty cool. I like the head turn, as if the eyes are locked onto potential prey.
Of the four posted so far, I like this the least. Well executed shot as usual and no question about that. With wing position as is, but I think a shot from higher perspective would make it look better...just my personal taste of course. I also think the face could be brighter. :):)