Great Egret #2

[Mital Patel]

Great Egret (Casmerodius albus)
Camera : Nikon D300
Lens : Nikkor 80-400D F-4.5/5.6 ED VR
Exposure : 1/5000sec @ 280mm
Aperture : f/7.1
ISO Rating : 400
Captured On : June 28 2009, 11:41 am
Location : Thol Bird Sanctuary, Mehsana, Gujarat, INDIA

Freely C&C please and suggest improvements.

[Judy Lynn Malloch]

Love the action you captured in this image but would love to have had more eye contact. If it was possible to crop more off the left and have more canvas on the right so as to off center the image it would strengthen it. You really want to leave room for the birds to leave the frame. Many thanks for sharing and I would look forward to your future posts.

[Aidan Briggs]

I agree with Judy on the eye contact, and comp. Lovely detail in the whites, but they could go brighter IMO.

[Rene Quenneville]

Another vote for Judy's point. Well captured moment.