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    Hi all

    Thanks for the comments and suggestions,

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    I like it lots. Just a few things bother me. Maybe take some space off the left and add to the right cause the tail on the right is a bit tight. Also tryh and remove the grass on the right by the tail. Well done on this

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    Hi Asad, I agree with Kolbus about more space on the right for the tail. As we are not seeing much color on the bird, how would you feel about a complete SILH?
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    Artie did it for me, I was going to suggest the exact same thing :)
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    I was also going to suggest going with a silhouette. Love your timing. Wish there was a bit more room to the right of the tail feathers.
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    I like the action, BG color and the silhouette idea. Aside from more room on the right I would be tempted to clone out the grass crossing the tail.

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