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    john crookes
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    Black Crown Night Heron
    waiting for a fish near a dam on the Charles River
    Nikon D2X with 400mm 2.8 at f7 and 1/160th
    ISO 400
    Last edited by john crookes; 01-04-2009 at 12:02 PM.

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    Sharp, nice COMP and perfect EXP. And a nice subject too. The foreground rock is a distraction. At the very least, I would crop away 2/3 to 3/4 of it.

    later and love, artie

    ps: Sort of like the image below. Also got rid of some whitewash, a hot spot or two, and a stick, mostly with the Patch Tool.
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    Axel Hildebrandt
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    Nice pose and details. I like Artie's crop suggestion. Could you have moved lower and to your left?

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    john crookes
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    i wished i could have moved a little but i had about a six inch window to photograph through as it was
    I am not a big guy on removing objects I just feel it was there and I am responsible for what is in the frame. I don't mind if others do it it is just my own feelings

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    Maxis Gamez
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    I have to agree with Artie's comment and second post.

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    Judy Lynn Malloch
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    Great capture and perfect exposure but I agree with Artie's suggestion about the rock. Thanks for sharing John !!

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