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    Vermenton
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    Default Osprey portrait

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    I'm new to this site but eared only good thing about it

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    Axel Hildebrandt
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    Welcome to BPN! Very nice first post, I like the look and wet plumage. I would sharpen the bird more and increase contrast and saturation a few points. As for the composition, if it were mine, I would crop a tad off the left and add a little room on the right. Please post the techs and keep them coming!

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    thank you, i will repost an upgraded version of that shot

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    Welcome to BPN!

    Nice first post. I agree with Axel regarding more sharpening and space at right.

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    Sabyasachi

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    Big Warm Welcome !!!!!!!

    Got to love that face Goofy expression !!! Agree with suggestions and can add would lighten and saturate the eye just a bit for more pop !!! I like it a lot !!!

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    Red carpet welcome. Good points have been covered, you could make this one look much better after the advise.
    It will be good if you include the camera settings so we can do an informed critique :)

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    Canon 40D
    Canon 500 mm 4 IS + 1.4 TC
    ISO 400
    1/2000 sec
    Fstop 5.6
    AV priority

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    Sinh Nhut Nguyen
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    Must have been a bad hair day, the crop looks fine with me, but I would like to brighten the image up a bit.

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    Welcome to BPN. Your techs look good, so cant understand why this is soft. A wet look for sure, and looking forward to more from you.

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    Thank oyu every one for oyu nice coment. Does anybody recomend a good worklfow easy to understand and follow regarding sharpening.

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    When you repost, go a bit brighter. Where are you from? And a big time thanks for your membership support!
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