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    It was fairly overcast last night, so I decided to setup in the blind in the backyard.



    Nikon D300 ~ Nikkor 300mm F/2.8 with Nikon 1.4x TC on Gitzo tripod
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    beautiful perch,colors,pose and bg,I would prefer to see a bit room on the right side!

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    I like the look-back pose, perch and BG. I would give it a bit more room on the right and bottom and selectively sharpen the head more since it looks as if the critical focus is on the back. I'm undecided if I would clone out the OOF leaves behind the tail.

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    Great Image love the colours and BG, one more vote for more space.

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    Beautiful look-back pose. Yes to more sharpening on the head, more room on the right, and I'd like to see that bottom leaf not cut off. Love the bg going from green to brown. Nice backyard you've got. :)

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    Quote Originally Posted by Axel Hildebrandt View Post
    I like the look-back pose, perch and BG. I would give it a bit more room on the right and bottom and selectively sharpen the head more since it looks as if the critical focus is on the back. I'm undecided if I would clone out the OOF leaves behind the tail.
    Axel sumed it up pretty well. I agree with him and I would have cloned out the off leaves.

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    Agree the head needs a bit more USM. Tight on the right and would probably clone the two leaves, for a stronger compo, with less distracting elements.

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    WIsh for the bottom leaf to be included too. Otherwise I love the colors and comp. Incredibly well created. :)

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    Well exposed colours, and a super pose. Another vote for more space on the right, and the only thing I would clone would be the small part of the plant just above the perch next to the tail.

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