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    Default Savannah Sparrow

    A recent photo taken while persuing other grassland birds.

    Canon 1D MarkIII
    Canon 500mm F/4 IS
    Canon 1.4x II
    1/2500s
    F/6.3
    Fill Flash -1 1/3
    Natural Perch (milk weed pods)
    Thanks for looking :D
    Mike Veltri

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    Axel Hildebrandt
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    Interesting perch, good eye contact, details and BG. I might give it a little bit more room at the top and desaturate the greens a few points. A little bit head turn towards you would have been nice but I like it as is.

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    agree with axel about the room up top. looks fantastic with that gnarly perch. bird looks almost 3D.

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    I like the size of the perch a lot as it gives you a sens of scale! I agree with Axel about his compositional suggestion. Do they use this pech a lot? If so, you might want to go back with some warmer light. Great use of fill-flash btw!

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    Nice image. Composition wise I would crop slightly from left and would add a bit of to the top.
    Perch looks lovely. :)

    Szimi

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    Love the comp and the sharpness of the bird and perch. Nice clean background as well.

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    Nice looking perch and composition. All in all a nice image.

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    Loved the perch and BG, nice light and colors, great contrast between subject/perch and BG. Great detail, and loose comp. Congratulations!

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