I like the wing position, BG and eye contact. I might sharpen the head a bit more. The light looks quite warm, does the sun rise that late this time of year? You made this around 9 AM, right?
Hi Chris, I like how you captured the action here but there. Too bad the eye ain't sharp and that you tried to fix it by oversharpening it. I don't know this bird, but the beak seems a bit oversaturated, taking away all the attention from the rest of the photograph. Perhaps you could tone it down just a tad?
Good colour, well exposed, pin sharp and nice comp with good wing position.
I think the yellow on the bill is clipped and a there is bit of noise on the wing. Both can be sorted in PP.
Last edited by Dave Barnes; 06-29-2009 at 06:26 AM.