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    another from last saturday. triple processed in nik color efex pro with low key, foliar and vignette blur.

    D300, 70-300 w/ ext tube, f/5.6, 1/1250s, 0EV, ISO 1600, bounce flash MP 1/4.

    comments and critiques welcome and appreciated.

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    Like what your doing Harold !!! Simple clean composition and lovely bg Good combination !!!

    Might have wanted something sharper on the flower with a tiny more density !!! Looks like your making good use of your new book !!! :)

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    The composition is good Doctor, I would recommend on cropping 1/4 from the bottom...also when working with a light background, would also recommend on stopping down on your aperture setting for more depth of field and a sharper matrix zone, on your flower. The saturation could be increased slightly. I like the color rendition, the background is soft and clean, the way it should be. Keep up the good work...:cool:

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    how's this guys? increased density and saturation. gus, instead of cropping the bottom, i did a transform and changed the scale to shorten the distance between the bottom of the frame and the bud.

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    Very good Doctor...I like the added punch...just take away the green leaf to the left side...your beautiful lady should have simple clean lines to showcase her the way she deserves to be...:) the leaf is extra baggage...I like it...:cool:

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    Harold, This is "SWEET" no pun intended!! I like the color tones and the BG color is very complimenting. I liked the narrower comp in the first one and agree w/ Gus to evict the partial leaf. Very nice presentation!

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    Repost is much better - IMHO. I agree with gus - the extra leaf needs to be evicted - doesnt add anythng to the composition.
    Less is more :)

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