Hi Dick. Great to see you here. Good job of framing and I like the nice soft light. The wings positions and the bushes in the BKGR are less than ideal, and the birds look as if they need a bit of selective sharpening.
later and love, artie
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The birds are flying away from you. Though this is not always a negative, I feel here that I would have preferred to to see them parallel to or slightly coming at you.