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    Default Theme: Shadows - passing the bridge

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    This was taken in the evening with light fog and long shadows. C&C welcome...

    ~ Indranil

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    very unique perspective.....nice depth.
    "might" crop bottom about half way up to sailboat for a stronger comp
    putting the horizon close to a 1/3 line

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    Thanks Dave. Here is a repost...

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    nice, for my taste this is a much stronger image

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    Indranil, Very neat perspective indeed!!! I like the shadow and the boat is a nice touch. Well done. The re-post looks good.

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    Yes, the 1/3 horizon looks a little better. Good effort, I really like it. Nice shadows.

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    I like the image. Nice work.

    I would suggest you consider some additional cropping however, to make the bridge structure more powerful. Basically, have the bottom of the bridge at the bottom right corner of the image, as you did in the original. Also, have the main span wire intersect the top right corner of the bridge and move the left border over to bring the sailboat into position.

    Just a suggestion, but see attached. The right border was adjusted to fit the bridge adjustments and cut between the vertical wires.

    Great image though.

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    Indranil
    This is a very pleasant image with wonderful colors. I like both of the reposts, too as well as the shadows. Well done.

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    Mark, thanks for the excellent suggestion. Here is a repost...

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    Denise, Akos, Lana, thanks for your feedback.

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    indranil, the last one does it for me, also. you did well capturing the fog and the shadows are nice..

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    Indranil, really nice - the repost is great!

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