I would suggest you consider some additional cropping however, to make the bridge structure more powerful. Basically, have the bottom of the bridge at the bottom right corner of the image, as you did in the original. Also, have the main span wire intersect the top right corner of the bridge and move the left border over to bring the sailboat into position.
Just a suggestion, but see attached. The right border was adjusted to fit the bridge adjustments and cut between the vertical wires.