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    Tried again some butterfly pictures in the garden.
    Canon 40D, EF70-200mm f4 IS
    f/4
    1/250sec
    ISO 250
    Suggestions welcome!

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    Hi there, I think this image could use some slight contrast adjustment. Also, the perch seems to be a bit over-whelmed. Here's my repost and hopefully it could give you some idea of what could be done. Basically, assuming the star of this photo is the butterfly, I'm trying to keep that as the primary focus of the viewers.

    Also, it would be better if the butterfly is more angled your way.

    Thanks for sharing !

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    i like what the contrast did for the bf, but i like the bg in the original better as well as the compo. repost seems crowded to me. very nice job all around, ovidiu. looks sharp, but might consider bumping the ISO for a little more shutter speed. will help in the long run!

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    Hi Ovidiu,
    I like the original as presented, the color rendition is good and you have sharp details in your subject...for my personal taste; I would crop just a 1/4 from the bottom to eliminate some of the out of focus flowers that keep catching my eye...aside from this, its very good...congrats...:cool:

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    Hi Ovidiu Strong basic image and will go with an in between I think the image could be tilted up slightly before cropping some .. would like seeing a less since it does tend to dominate.

    btw this is a great example of taste You could crop it in different ways or leave it alone but fine image any way you look at it !!!

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    Hi Ovidiu, Very nice image! Good clean BG, great details on the butterfly, and love the colors. I agree that the OOF flowers are a bit distracting, but not sure what the best way would be to minimize that. Would suggest you just experiment with cropping and find what you like best!

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    Thank you all for coments and suggestion.

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