I like the pose of the bird and the eye contact. You did a good job considering the intensity of the light. I suggest another round of USM for web presentation. The bird is a bit tight to the left IMO. BTW, I love this stork species :-)
I also think a bit more sharpening would help. I like how the head and bill are fully back stopped by the far wing. The bill seems to stand out more. Nice one. Dave