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    Todd Frost
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    Osprey with lunch. Light was alternating sun and cloud cover.
    D300, 400 2.8 w1.4tc, 1/2000, f5.6, iso400, man exp.
    Thanks for looking, comments and critiques appreciated.
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    This has a real arty feel to it. Like the composition here - although some people might like a closer crop on the bird. Depends what you are going for really. Awesome bird!

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    Like the way you've anchored the tree on the right side although I think I'd like to see a little more trunk. Maybe needs a tiny boost of contrast.

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    I like the behavior and perch. The angle is a bit steep and it looks a bit flat on my monitor. Adjusting midtones and/or contrast might give it a bit more 'punch'.

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    Good eye contact Todd, and he chose the best available perch. Comp wise, I would take a bit off the bottom to just below the short branch, as I feel there is too much space up there, and he is looking down.

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    Ditto Axel. Composition wise, I might crop it to a horizontal. I do like the clouds in the BG though.

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