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    Default Black Vulture

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    Techs:
    Canon 40D
    Canon 400MM 5.6
    HH
    f/5.6
    1/1600
    ISO=320
    EV=0
    Mid-morning light

    Workflow:
    LR (full frame, minor exposure adjustments - push +1/3)----interface-->CS4 (selective sharpen eye, smart sharpen, selective color adjustments, dodge eye, Topaz de-noise)

    For those who might understand the inside joke - Total time spent, post processing image 27 minutes (smile)
    Last edited by Jeff Cashdollar; 06-17-2009 at 11:56 PM.

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    Ákos Lumnitzer
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    I like the contrasting BG with the subject. You appear to have enough DOF, but I would suggest more sharpening as it looks just a little soft to me. Thanks for sharing Jeff. :)

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    Nice portrait here well exposed. Ditto softness. Well done

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    Default Repost - more Smart Sharpening

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    More Sharpening

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    Jeff:

    I agree with Akos and Kobus about the sharpness. For close up portraits like this to work, they just have to be killer sharp, at least on the eye.

    I might lower the overall brightness of the image just a bit.

    Thanks for sharing. It is good that his mother loves him, as this is one ugly bird :) :)

    Randy

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    Colin Morey
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    I think it looks soft, especially on the neck, perhaps not soft, but hazy if that makes sense? I like the catchlight though, nice and clear. ditto on the brightness, perhaps a slight tweak to the black point before sharpening?

    At least its beak is clean... :)

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    Ákos Lumnitzer
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    Jeff,

    Your repost is a 100% improvement as far as I can see. Congrats, good job mate. :) Not sure if you follow this method, but after you resize the image for web, zoom into 100% and see how the sharpening changes the appearance of the final image. That's the key. :)

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