Tough lighting conditions. The harsh light coming from almost directly above has made it impossible to light up the face and body properly. I would be tempted to lighten the subject even more (if it doesn't introduce too much colour noise) as the shadow it is in makes it seem darker than it should. Nice gliding pose, with the curled primaries on far wing adding a bit of interest.
Arash, Did you replace the original post? Dan's comments do not fit with what I am looking at.
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Thanks Arash, That said, I will, for probably the first time ever, disagree with Dan who suggested "lightening the subject even more." It already looks muddy from being lightened too much---to much Shadow Adj.
I do like the pose and the head angle. Can you post a JPEG that represents the ORIG capture (which I suspect is grossly under-EXPed. Convert is without any adjustments and make an 800 jpeg from that.
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