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    Hi, my name is Bart Masellis I am a new member of Eager to Learn.
    I took this photo at Fruit & Spice Park in Homestead, Florida

    Canon EOS XSI, Sigma 150 Macro, f/22, 1/160, ISO 200

    All comments and sugestions are welcome.

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    A big warm welcome to the BPN family Bart...glad to have you on board...:) you can post at a higher resolution...The composition is superb, I like the selective focus and the depth of field...you did quite well, considering that the sun was pounding on you that morning...you have fine sharp details and very good color rendition...the composition is balanced and has symmetry. I like the tri color level on the leaf, well done. A big congrats...looking forward to more...:cool:

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    Bart - wonderful first post. Welcome!:D

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    Really nice Bart !!! Cool image in a hot day :)

    I like the strong composition and placement of elements Just right !!! About all I would do is increase density on the lighter yellow (left side) just a tad !!! Big Warm Welcome and looking forward to many more !!!!

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    Done, I did replace the photo.

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    Much better Bart...well done...:cool:

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    Hi Bart. Big welcome and congrats on a lovely first post! I like the color rendition and organic detail. The composition is excellent. Hope to see many more. Would suggest that you make your re-post as a new image so all can see the changes made. Thanks for sharing!
    "It is an illusion that photos are made with the camera... they are made with the eye, heart, and head." - Henri Cartier Bresson

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    Hi Bart - another big warm welcome to the BPN Family - Nice first post. Love the composition and the colours has a very 3D feel to it.
    Looking forward to seeing more :)

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