EXP and sharpness look good from here. Head turn or lack there-of the biggest issue; a bit more room above is #2.
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The BG could do with a bit of blurring maybe and the hot-spots on bill could do with a bit of toning down but otherwise it's a nice portrait, looks sharp enough I think.