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    Default Woodstork Portrait

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    Good light and eye contact. I would sharpen the bird more, blur the BG and wish for a bit head turn towards you.

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    I would also try to tone down the hot spots.
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    Lovely textures and BG. Agree on increasing the sharpening.
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    Nits mentioned are all good ones. Nice portrait.

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    EXP and sharpness look good from here. Head turn or lack there-of the biggest issue; a bit more room above is #2.
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    The BG could do with a bit of blurring maybe and the hot-spots on bill could do with a bit of toning down but otherwise it's a nice portrait, looks sharp enough I think.

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