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    Taken in Kanha National Park, India.

    Did clone out a branch (unsuccessfully, most likely) from behind the bird. Sorry for the space on the left, had to eliminate a tree stump.

    Techs: EOS 1D Mk2, ISO 400, 600mm at f/5.6 (300 .8 Is with caon 2x tele) , 1/1000, Av, Handheld

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    The bird looks great; nice and sharp with great light and good eye contact. The green BG is pretty. However I find the parts of the perch behind the bird to be significantly distracting. Also I'd like to see the bird placed in the right of the frame. I'll try a repost; check back a little later.
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    Kiran I am not familiar with this species but I think that the colors are a bit flat. The light is strong but I like the pose of the bird and the neat eye contact. From a compositional point of view I agree with your self critic... more room at the left is necessary and another round of noise reduction to the BG would be great :-)

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    Here you go.
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    my vote for repost by Doug
    this is too good
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    Lovely work with the image,Doug. Thanks !

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    Super pose, and I like the light in this, especially on the eye. Doug has reposted his suggestions, and they work well.

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    Lovely colours and detail and a super pose. Doug repost look great
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    Very nice image. Agree with Doug on the composition. Maybe his rework is too much modification on this image. I would leave the bg branch as is. A tad of sharpening would be useful.

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    Beautiful shot, I like both versions.
    I don't mind the extra branches in this instance but prefer Doug's crop.

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