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    Dear All
    Taken near City Dam area with Nikon D300, 600MM, ISO 200,
    This is a full frame shot .Greater Flamingos breeds in Gujarat & widespread visitors of plains.

    Ali C & C welcome & appreicated

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    Beautiful Harshad... Loved the colours, expo and pose. I would prefer a more off centre placement of the subject.. nevertheless I loved the image..

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    Nice pose and well exposed. Just watch the sharpening halos. Well done here

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    Ok. this is a fantastic light and good pose and colors.
    My only suggestion is to reduce the sharpness as the halos are clearly visible.

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    Hi Mital & Kobus
    I too felt that this is tad oversharpned
    Posting other version let me know how it looks now
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    much much better now. i would suggest you to do CCW rotation 2/3%

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    Another correction Mital
    Is it ok now
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    Hard to tell which is level.... IAC, getting much lower here, right on the ground if possible, would have provided a purer background. Love the bird and the EXP. The bill tip is farther away from the imaging sensor than the eye. Best would be for those distances to be the same so that the head would perfectly parallel the imaging sensor.

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    Dear Arthur

    First of all ' Happy Birthday to you '
    My image sensor was in level with neck start
    Which level I should use ?
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    Super pose Harshad, with good exposure and colours. I would maybe move him to the right a bit, and add some space to the left, and at the bottom for the rest of the virtual legs.

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    I like the pose, eye contact and less sharpened version looks good. Maybe a bit more room for the 'virtual feet' and I would put the bird a bit further to the right in the frame.

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    Beautiful colors on the feathers. Excellent exposure.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Harshad Barve View Post
    Dear Arthur, First of all ' Happy Birthday to you ' My image sensor was in level with neck start Which level I should use ? Harshad
    Thank you sir. I am 63 today. And thanks for your membership support. (I learned that only members can have nicknames :))

    For this image in particular, I would have gotten right down on the ground if possible, even taking the lens off any type of mount or tripod head. That would have eliminated the one and one-half brown bands in the water... It may have, however, totally changed the BKGR and thus the image....
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    I still see some sharpnening halos in the bill, head, neck and belly, but overall I like the pose, BG, light, detail and colors. Congratulations!

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