Sharp with a good HA but harsh light, too tight, and clipped toes are all big negatives.
BIRDS AS ART Blog: great info and lessons, lots of images with our legendary BAA educational Captions; we will not sell you junk. 30+ years of long lens experience/e-mail with gear questions.
BIRDS AS ART Online Store: we will not sell you junk. 35 years of long lens experience. Please e-mail with gear questions.
Check out the new SONY e-Guide and videos that I did with Patrick Sparkman here. Ten percent discount for BPN members,
Todd, I find that if Ive clipped a limb or wing, I go in tight, and just show the head. In this, you could crop just below the black on the neck. Lovely pose, and love the eye.
Your composition takes one straight to the well-focussed and exposed head. The only issue for me would be the cut off toes; it does look a bit tightly cropped, but mostly on the bottom, in my opinion.