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    Pull-up No. 1

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    This little blue tit is doing (or do you say making?) some morning pull-ups ;)
    Hope it makes some of you smile....

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    It sure made me smile. Does he have to do another 99?????
    Sure hope not :)

    Centered compo works here, but you owe me some at the bottom.

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    Would add to do a little work on the whites They are right at the edge Multiplying layers seems to work well Love the pose and look of concern !!!!!

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    Doing some pull ups is correct. Overall (surprisingly) too light and a bit washed out. Needs a bit more room below the bird. Very sharp on the face and a good basic COMP.

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    Thank you for your comments.
    I followed your advice and make the repost now.
    I am not sure why the picture gets those ugly colour-lines in the BG. May be it's from compressing it too much or in a wrong way. I don't have them in the original.

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    gary rouleau
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    Much nicer -well done.

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    Maxis Gamez
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    Second pose works much better. I wish for a little more room at the bottom, but that's about it.

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    Axel Hildebrandt
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    The repost looks much better, but seems to be a bit oversharpened.

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