Very interesting one. The DOF is a challenge here, and I think you probably made the best choice. It would have been interesting to see how far you could focus into the flock and still keep the front row acceptably sharp.
I tried a pano crop, coming down about 1/3 of the way from the top. There is a slight natural break line based on some color variation there. It looked OK. So hard to not clip some of the birds, not matter how you crop this.
Love the monochromatic look and the clean lower edge. I wish that the preening bird and the one with its head raised had been sleeping like the rest of them.
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Lovely textures - even the seaweed on the beach works well to frame the front corners. I would explore Randy's pano crop suggestion as it can deal with Artie's 2 birds too.