The eye-level view gives this photo a nice sense of intimacy. The image looks a little dark; definitely some room for a bit of + EC. Otherwise very nice. Looks like Louisiana was awesome!
I like the angle and details and agree with Doug regarding positive EC that would have helped. Maybe adjusting the midtones would help. I would also crop off the dark band at the top and maybe more room on the right.
Lovely sighting! Agree with the exposure here. Composition wise, I would have preferred a little more space on the bottom, and a little less at the top. I hope they got their fish!