This one looks quite soft compared to the first post in the series, Charlie. I like the open bill but would suggest a bit of a crop from above and maybe the right. Spots in the water would be worth cleaning up. Not sure if a lower angle was possible.
Nice action captured, Charles, and the repost does look sharper. I would agree about cropping from the top - and that would also remove some of the lighter areas in the water that tend to draw my eye. Why can't they build those boardwalks closer to water level? :) :)
The repost is an improvement. I like the composition and open bill. A lower angle would have been nice and I would remove the white spots in the water.
I like the repost Charles. Love the open bill and you've got a great perch. It's too bad that you have to shoot from a boardwalk. I would remove some of the spots in the water.