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    Dear All
    Taken at lake in city
    This is Full Frame shot

    D300/600/ISO200/f7.1
    all C & C welcome

    Harshad
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    Striding pose and details look good. I wish the eye had a catchlight and I would give it more room at the bottom for the 'virtual foot'. Since it is full frame, maybe you can extend the canvas.

    P.S.: I changed your title to regular type, all caps is considered screaming. ;)

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    Good comments from Axel ... might also consider selectively toning down the brightest areas of the BG a bit.

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    Ditto the eye. Great pose and colour. I do feel you need a bit of space at the bottom

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    Harshad, good detail, and you have exposed the colours nicely. I like the raised foot, and agree more room at the bottom would work.

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