I like the symmetry of the pose and that intense eye contact. The beetle really adds an element on interest. I think darkening down the mid tones a little and darkening the grass stems left upper corner would be worth a try.
A very intense stare. I would be very afraid if I was that bug. Tony gave good advice as usual. I feel it is a bit tight, but because the owl is crouching down, it doesn't bother me much. The eyes are riveting.
Great capture of action/predation Danny. The eyes are intense and the owl almost looks guilty being caught in the act! I think the tight comp adds to this effect.