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    sten-åke nilsson
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    Default Feeding time

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    sparrow..canon 1d mkIII 500 4L with 1.4x tc. iso 160 1/1000 f6.3 c&c are welcome

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    IMO you should've left room towards where the bird is looking at, nice light, pose, perch, BG and detail.

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    Axel Hildebrandt
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    I like the eye contact, perch and snack. I agree with Ramon regarding putting the bird further to the right in the frame and would sharpen the bird more.

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    I like the upright pose, strong head turn, and intense stare into the light outside the frame. A plus for the "prize" in its beak. Another plus for ignoring the 'rule' that a subject should be looking into the frame and not out of it. This is a stronger image for it. (And you're in the best of company.)

    Consider darkening the right side a bit with a gradient. This pulls the light more to the left -- and with it, the viewer's eye. Also would benefit from some sharpening, especially around the eye.


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    sten-åke nilsson
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    thanks everybody for comments and advices..very helpful, regards sten

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