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    Dave Phillips
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    Asian.....in a Louisiana pond!

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    Last edited by Dave Phillips; 05-27-2009 at 10:14 PM.

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    Dave, this is fine tuned! Chop, calligraphy, color and placement look good and balanced. The chop could be centered under the cal. but when I use my chops, I often miss my mark and this is good, looks real! I only wish for more black within the image somehow, but it's very good as is:D.

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    Really nice feel Dave I think the suggestion of more black is great !! ... nice stock image !!!!

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    Dave,

    Excellent image. I'm not a great Hi Key fan, but this is a very good one. I like it. ;)

    Guess I will stay out of this weeks event! ;)

    How much for a 40 x 60 print? :D ;)

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    Like this image a lot. Another vote for a bit more of black.

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    Dave, This has a very peaceful,serene look to it and I love the monochromatic feel to it. Maybe you could add another thin border of black around the entire image in an effort to add more black-I'd hate to see you loose the soft feel to this.

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    Terrific presentation, the weeds are great and so is the whole package, very well done!

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    Thank you for the comments friends
    I have been working for an hour with more black and it just doesn't seem to work for me at this point.
    Maybe if I totally started over, but moving on to the next one.

    Anyone feel free to try the more black
    This is a bit different:
    Last edited by Dave Phillips; 05-26-2009 at 06:20 PM.

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    Dave, I would leave it as is-It's soft colored and soothing! I think it's great!!!

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    Quote Originally Posted by denise ippolito View Post
    Dave, I would leave it as is-It's soft colored and soothing! I think it's great!!!
    I think you are right......less is more

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