Very nice pose and plumage. A lower angle would have helped a lot since the shadow of the bird is quite overpowering. I would also try to tone down the whites a bit, they look borderline hot. It is a bit tight in the frame for my taste.
Agree with Alex but the whites do not look too bad here. You did a good job of dealing with the rather harsh lighting.
later and love, artie
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