I think you have been doing some excellent graphic comps, but this one IMO has
too much negative space on the left of frame. Also where you have been selectively sharpening,
there is always a grouping of sharpening artifacts....just overdone.
Here is a suggestion, cropped and a lt mauve to lime green gradient applied
I give these comments as honest critique
Last edited by Dave Phillips; 05-24-2009 at 08:37 PM.