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    A common egret in full breeding plumage in Doñana National Park several weeks.
    As always, your comments, critics and suggestions are for me an excellent way to improve my photographies :)

    Nikon D2X (HSC mode, 6Mp), AFS Nikkor 300VR+1,4XTC manual exposure, handheld from my car, ISO400 1/2500s f4

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    Axel Hildebrandt
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    I like wing position, details, breeding plumage and BG. It could go a tad brighter for my taste.

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    I agree with axel, a tad brighter.. looks cream colored on my calibrated monitor.

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    I would suggest toning down the back of the bird and brightening the catchlight, I like the pose, BG, and loose comp. Congratulations Juan!

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    Beautiful composition Juan and excellent comments from above. I really like that the environment is included in this image. Congratulations and thanks for sharing.

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    Nice wings down flight pose and I really like the drops of water behind the feet. Lovely bg and environment. The color temperature seems a little warm, and I would also brighten the image. Nice capture.

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    oops, I fully agree about the yellowish cast :o The whites on the back are far from the 255 level but I toned down a bit, removed the color cast and added a touch of light to the eye and looks better. Thanks for the feedback gals and guys :)

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    Juan, excellent exposure, lovely flying posture, and pin sharp. The egret pops from the BG nicely. Well captured.

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    Nice flightshot Juan, but your repost does look a bit dirty. That colourcast is still there, and not too difficult to remove. This looks more natural to me.

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    Juan your second repost is right on.

    Lovely species and flying pose. The BG tells a story as the drops of water. Great image. I agree about a little more tight but that's just a my taste.

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    Jasper you fixed the color cast very well :)
    Thanks a lot for all the comments

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